This entry was posted on November 6, 2011 by erikkloeker. It was filed under Uncategorized .
Erick, Overall i think you did a great job on this project. I really loved the usage of visuals and charts throughout the entire draft. That really helped solidify what you were talking about and made it easy to follow. There were a few spacing issues and typos so just make sure you proofread a little more. But like i said i think you did a great job for it being a draft.
November 7, 2011 at 8:17 pm
I would only reccommend a few changes to your document. 1) check the spacing to make sure each part is on a separate page as the book shows. 2) make sure you do your references in MLA format. 3) i found your graphics to be slightly confusing and took up too much of the document. As a reader if i was to skim this i wouldnt begin to look at your graphics because they are so intricate 🙂 overall, just rework a few things and you will have a great document to submit.
November 7, 2011 at 10:32 pm
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