My Submission for Summaries Draft.
This entry was posted on October 11, 2011 by erikkloeker. It was filed under Uncategorized .
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October 11, 2011 at 5:23 pm
I apologize, I must have overlooked pushing the insert into document button. My summaries draft is now posted. Thanks for your feedback.
October 12, 2011 at 12:08 am
Overall i think you did a good job on these summaries. The only mistakes i saw were some grammatical errors and a run on sentence or two. Your summaries were quite a bit longer than the requirement so I do not know if that is good or bad, but i do think there are a few sentences that could be taken out due to being a bit wordy. I think you did well on these though so good job.
October 12, 2011 at 7:58 pm
You have very well written summaries. The main idea in both summaries are clearly stated in the begining of each of them. The length of the summaries however, were suppose to be closer to 200 words, your summaries were longer than that. You can fix this by getting rid of a few sentences from each of the summaries. Other than that you have a well written paper.
October 13, 2011 at 2:12 am
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