In the download below you will find my job package explanatory worksheet.
This entry was posted on September 13, 2011 by erikkloeker. It was filed under Uncategorized .
Eric, you did an overall great job on your assignment. Your worksheet was fully answered leaving no room for questioning. As for your cover letter i feel like you did a nice job at explaining why you were right for the position that was being offered. You said why you were passionate about that possible career opportunity which i feel in return would appeal to the reader. The only thing i would add to your cover letter would be a phone number. Your resume also did a great job at showing your work experience and why you qualified for that position. Overall good job on this assignment.
September 14, 2011 at 7:24 pm
After reading your Job Package it seems like you have put a ton of effort into this project. I noticed however that there are few confusing things. On your worksheet, it reads as if you copied and pasted the information that you know about the company rather than putting it into your own words. Also you may need to add a little more detail. On the cover letter great job! The only thing i would correct is the spacing issues and make sure it fits into one page. The final Resume’ section looks great but it seems a little hard to read. The way that you have the lines separating each section focuses your eye on that rather than the great skills you poses as a potential employee. Other than these few issues great job and good luck with your future job endeavors.
September 14, 2011 at 7:47 pm
You have done a great job on this assignment. You completed the worksheet questions very well. The information in your application letter was very good, it showed that you have had experience in marketing before and that you can bring leadership to Dannon. I like how it shows “your attitude” in the letter, when I read it I see confidence and determination, which are good in business. The only thing that needs work done to is the heading of the resume, you need your name and contact information. Other than that I believe you have a good application letter and resume for the job.
September 15, 2011 at 1:26 am
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